作者willie0812 (willie)
看板Eng-Class
标题[文法] 想请板友帮我看看有没有文法的错误 或是语意不顺的
时间Mon Aug 30 17:46:26 2010
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朋友写了下面几句英文 是公司要放在网站上的
想请人帮忙检查看看有没有文法错误 或是语意不顺(台式英文)
无奈小弟我英文实在不佳 看不出个什麽东东
麻烦板友可以帮忙检查看看吗?!
As Eurobike show is on the corner, Birzman staffs were like cats on a hot
tin roof.
In order to catch everyone’s eyes, Birzman prepared everything diligently!
These are only a part of the luggage to Eurobike show!
Besides, everyone has to share about 50 to 60 DMs! It’s really heavy…..
This is our handsome boss~~~He looks good in that fitting suit.
Birzman designers! They are really shy to let me take pictures.
But I still took some furtively! Ha~~~
What fantastic products of Birzman will be shown at Eurobike show for 2011?
Will I tell you what they are? Ha~~~ not really! Keep you in suspense.
Do not be open-mouthed as you see the incredible products by Birzman team!
(应该算是照片的注解吧)
谢谢
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