作者xpower50 (37303)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 一段句子
时间Fri Aug 27 19:33:46 2010
※ 引述《vocalsinger (不停的走)》之铭言：
: 求英译：
: ‧ According to Harold C. Schonberg, “Musical Vienna was divided on the
: merits of the Eroica. Some called it Beethoven’s masterpiece. Others said
: that the work merely illustrated a striving for originality that did not come
: off.”
: 我的试译：
: Harold C. Schonberg说:维也纳的音乐由英雄的价值所分割.有些人说他是贝多芬的大
: 作.
: 其他人说此作品仅仅说明了表现出努力的独创性
: 提问：
: 我觉得文句有点不通顺@@请问其他人有更好的翻译句子吗?谢谢你们不吝指教!
was divided on the merits of something
=was divided on whether or not something is a good idea
did not come off 你没有翻到
这里的come off应该是to be successful
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※ 编辑: xpower50 来自: 115.43.19.2 (08/27 19:36)
1F：推 vocalsinger:谢谢您!!我会再努力翻翻看! 08/27 23:37