作者vocalsinger (不停的走)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 三段句子
时间Fri Aug 27 19:17:22 2010
求英译：
‧ According to Harold C. Schonberg, “Musical Vienna was divided on the
merits of the Eroica. Some called it Beethoven’s masterpiece. Others said
that the work merely illustrated a striving for originality that did not come
off.”
我的试译：
Harold C. Schonberg说:维也纳的音乐由英雄的价值所分割.有些人说他是贝多芬的大
作.
其他人说此作品仅仅说明了表现出努力的独创性
提问：
我觉得文句有点不通顺@@请问其他人有更好的翻译句子吗?谢谢你们不吝指教!
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