我翻的这段英文翻译被指导老师说怪怪的， 但又没指明哪里怪怪的~~>"< 只说再拿回去修修看吧...... 看起来很台式没有错，想请要要怎麽改会比较顺畅，麻烦大家帮我看看了~~ 求英译： 莺歌以陶艺做为地方特色产业能够成功，我们发现原因在於： 一、地方特色产业的选定应与历史背景文化渊源相配合。 二、地方政府主导地方特色产业发展。 三、地方政府有效摒除地方派系掣肘。 四、住民、商圈业者社区意识为地方特色产业发展的後盾。 五、陶艺地方特色产业成功转型为科技陶工的副品牌。 我的试译：（求译「段落」者，本栏请勿留白） The success of developing ceramic industry in Yingge, the reason is that First, to select the local industry should cooperate with the local culture and history. Second, the local government should lead development of local industries. Third, the local government should remove interruption of local groups effectively. Fourth, community consciousness of citizen and industries should be supporters of developing local industries. Fifth, shift the art ceramics local industry to secondary brands of ceramics technology engineering successfully. --

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