作者hoch (Sanctuary)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 我写了英文感谢函给雇主 请帮我看一下갠…
时间Sun Aug 1 16:07:30 2010
Dear Manager Obama
: Nice to have this great chance to see you again on Friday,
: I think it is still
: in exciting mood to work with you in the following days.
- on Friday 後面用句点
- It was nice to meet you again last Friday. I enjoy our conversation
very much.
- I am really excited about having the opportunity to work with you
in ABC Corp.
: I look for a good copmany located in sourther Taiwan even close my house ,
: it is also my dream if I want to live my country and work around here
- 不明白这句用现在式是有特殊意义? 老实说,没有上下文,不是很懂你要讲
什麽。
- Initially I was looking for jobs in southern part of Taiwan, which is
closer to my home town. Comparing with working overseas, I also
prefer staying in Taiwan.
: A little suprise for me there is a such international company found here
: for 20 years history and hide behind police station ,
- Again, 这句话用义在哪里?
- I found that, while being a multi-national corporation,
ABC Corp. has established its office in Taiwan for 20 years. To
my surprise, its office is located in a low-profile
district behind a police station.
: Thank you for your positive approval,
- 句子结束请用句点。
- 另外你想说的是 "正面肯定"?
- Your kind offer is really appreciated. To me it is an important
recognition of my skills and experiences.
: I will pay my efforts and keep in good condition to learn from you to
: understand xxx business field.
- "pay my effort"?看不太懂。
- Although my background is not directly related to the field,
I'll try my best to settle myself upon reporting to ABC Corp.
: I will discuss with my current company to make everything clear for my
: present position and confirm what time I will be on board ,
: I will inform and have a discussion with you by next week.
: Thanks again for your approval .
- I will let you know the exact date that
I can report to ABC Corp once I submit my resignation to
my current company next week.
Thank you again for giving me the opportunity.
Best regards,
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1F:→ babbitt1007:我想原po说的pay my efforts应该是要说 08/01 18:53
2F:→ babbitt1007:会尽他的努力吧?乱猜XXDD 08/01 18:53
3F:→ babbitt1007:我建议信件的抬头也改一下,只有dear不是很恰当呢 08/01 18:54
4F:推 babbitt1007:for giving me the opportunity? 08/01 18:57
5F:→ babbitt1007:所有格跟the不能连用。还是我记错了? 08/01 18:57
6F:→ usread:诚心建议寄一封中文信即可.原件「不佳」会反效果,代改文太 08/01 19:00
7F:→ usread:佳会错误引导成造期待落差反而不美.现在开始加强不迟,加油! 08/01 19:02
※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 111.248.7.32 (08/01 22:53)