作者tengharold (RoadMan_A)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 练习翻译,请版友提供修改建议
时间Wed Jul 28 23:47:09 2010
※ 引述《wadewang (小龟)》之铭言:
: 属句子/段落:(三行以上皆属段落)
: 中文部分:
: 广东精打细算的家庭主妇在卖蒜的摊位前抱怨,蒜头比猪肉还贵,每斤都涨到人民币9元
: 以上,「我决定不吃了」。当地媒体在菜摊上甚至看到1斤13元的大蒜,价格已涨到10年
: 来新高。
: 多位批发商向南方都市报表示,今年大蒜涨价主要原因是产量低、种植成本上涨。其次,
: 今年大蒜出口比往年多,国内的销量减少。运输等成本的增加也是大蒜涨价的原因,尤其
: 种植成本的增加更是主因。
: 据了解,中国大蒜产地以山东、江苏为主,当地经济成长,农药和肥料的成本也在涨,加
: 上北方的天灾,导致蒜价涨了不少。
: 广东省价格监测中心分析表示,尽管目前是新蒜大量上市时节,蒜价却如坐云霄飞车连创
: 新高。一些菜市场和超市发现,蒜头零售价多在1斤9到13元之间。
: 我的试译:(求译「段落」者,本栏请勿留白)
: Homemakers with careful calculation and strict budgeting complained the high
homemaker...budgeting 这段翻得太硬 complained ABOUT
: price of garlic in front of street vendors. The price of it was over 9 NCY a
用garlic比较明确^^ RMB
: catty, which is more expensive than pork. 「I give up!!」 In the market the
^^^^^^^^可省略 "I'm not buying this!" She said.
: local media even found that the price was over 13 NCY a catty which hit new
local reporters garlic at 13 RMB per catty, a price not seen in 10
years.
: high in a decade.
: The main cause of garlic price rise this year was output decline and
this price hike was...
: cultivation cost rise, many wholesalers told 南方都市报. In the next place,
increases, The Nandu Daily. 其次=furthermore,
: the increasing exports and decreasing domestic sales volume of garlic
: compared to former years were also the reasons of garlic price rise. In
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^可省略 for this price hike.
: addition to cultivation cost rise, the main reason of raising price of
increases (the main reason for the price hike),
: garlic, transport cost rise also had influence on garlic price.
rising transport costs also pushed up garlic prices.
: It was understood that the main producing area was山东and江苏. Economic
Shandong and Jiangsu are understood to be the major garlic producing areas.
: growth, cost rise of insecticide and fertilizer of these places and the
Economic growth drove up the costs of insecticide... in these areas, and
: natural disaster in northern China led to garlic price rise.
natural disasters in... ... all further contributed to this hike.
以上都是砖头~
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1F:推 wadewang:好多砖头...T_T 非常感谢你的修改.... 07/29 00:46
2F:→ tengharold:继续加油~想当年我大一写哲学报告,直接被教授退件 07/29 01:12
3F:→ tengharold:然後再加一句"过来找我",因为我文法+文字逻辑太差 07/29 01:13
4F:→ tengharold:也是一直写一直被改,但写越久被改越少... 07/29 01:14
5F:→ tengharold:十多年後换我改别人 XD 所以继续写,会进步的 07/29 01:14
6F:推 ajia0818:十多年 ̄▽ ̄" 07/29 09:52
7F:→ tengharold:你从开始会讲话以来,学中文的时间不只十几年了吧 XD 07/29 12:40