作者wadewang (小龟)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 练习翻译,请版友提供修改建议
时间Wed Jul 28 09:17:59 2010
属句子/段落:(三行以上皆属段落)
中文部分:
广东精打细算的家庭主妇在卖蒜的摊位前抱怨,蒜头比猪肉还贵,每斤都涨到人民币9元
以上,「我决定不吃了」。当地媒体在菜摊上甚至看到1斤13元的大蒜,价格已涨到10年
来新高。
多位批发商向南方都市报表示,今年大蒜涨价主要原因是产量低、种植成本上涨。其次,
今年大蒜出口比往年多,国内的销量减少。运输等成本的增加也是大蒜涨价的原因,尤其
种植成本的增加更是主因。
据了解,中国大蒜产地以山东、江苏为主,当地经济成长,农药和肥料的成本也在涨,加
上北方的天灾,导致蒜价涨了不少。
广东省价格监测中心分析表示,尽管目前是新蒜大量上市时节,蒜价却如坐云霄飞车连创
新高。一些菜市场和超市发现,蒜头零售价多在1斤9到13元之间。
我的试译:(求译「段落」者,本栏请勿留白)
Homemakers with careful calculation and strict budgeting complained the high
price of garlic in front of street vendors. The price of it was over 9 NCY a
catty, which is more expensive than pork. 「I give up!!」 In the market the
local media even found that the price was over 13 NCY a catty which hit new
high in a decade.
The main cause of garlic price rise this year was output decline and
cultivation cost rise, many wholesalers told to南方都市报. In the next place,
the increasing exports and decreasing domestic sales volume of garlic
compared to former years were also the reasons of garlic price rise. In
addition to cultivation cost rise, the main reason of raising price of
garlic, transport cost rise also had influence on garlic price.
It was understood that the main producing area was山东and江苏. Economic
growth, cost rise of insecticide and fertilizer of these places and the
natural disaster in northern China led to garlic price rise.
提问:
我发现英文杂志听多了,变成一个会听不会讲的状况
想说利用中翻英的方式练习英文的使用方法
如果有各位版友有空的话
麻烦帮小弟我看看这样翻译哪边需要做修正
或是有更好的用字用词方法
感谢各位!
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1F:→ usread:用字用词不错,显示听力累积效果 07/28 11:28
2F:→ usread:但是文法句构错误太多,需要加强 07/28 11:28
3F:→ wadewang:可以指示一下哪编有错误吗? 感谢你!! 07/28 11:59
4F:→ usread:单复数,时态,词性,raise vs rise... 07/28 12:31
※ 编辑: wadewang 来自: 123.192.217.43 (07/28 12:46)
5F:→ tengharold:我有空再帮原po改一下,一眼瞄去第一个问题就是NCY是什 07/28 13:38
6F:→ wadewang:是人民币的意思! 07/28 13:57
7F:→ tengharold:那是RMB吧~ 新台币=NTD并不代表人民币=NCY 07/28 14:06