※ 引述《monkey0524 ()》之铭言： : Hello,my name is XXX. I’m glad to introduce myself to you. I graduated : from XXXXXXX University last year and I just discharge from army as a second was just honorably discharged from the army... : lieutenant. I’m a platoon leader in army and I had learned a lot of things I was a platoon leader and learned many things from the army. : from army. I’m a easy-going and optimistic person. My interest is baseball , an My interests are... : table tennis and dog. I am also a member of baseball team in university. I and I alos love dogs. I was a member of my University's baseball team. : have many experience of part-time job because I have to pay living expense by I have had many part-time jobs in order to support myself [and I think this shows my independance]. : myself. My Japanese language is certificated and I plan to get certification I have a XXX certificate in Japanese, and I plan to become certified : of English because I’m interesting in English. Except for language, I also in English too, because I'm interested in it as well. Aside from languages, I am also knowledgeable in computer hardware. My friends always ask me for : know about computer hardware. When my friend got some problem, they always : ask me for help and I always pleased to help them. I hope I can find a job help when they have computer issues, and I am always pleased to help them. : that suited to me and get some work I hope I can find a suitable job, [and put my skills and passion to work for your company] : Thanks for your listening. Thank you for listening [Thank you for your time]. : 这是面试要用的英文自介 : 因为英文说跟写的程度比较不好 : 觉得整篇下来I 很多 不知道有没有办法让I少一点 I 很多其实还好，你可以写的再长一点，把你的经验跟人家要的能力连在一起 还有你当阿排学到了甚麽? 光讲"学到很多"是不够的 讲领导统御、待人处事、执行任务 : 麻烦各位专家帮我修改一下了顺便挑出问题点 : 谢谢 -- Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something. -Plato (427BC-347BC) Plato is boring. -Frederich Nietzsche (1844-1900) Nietzsche was stupid and abnormal. -Leo Tolstoy (1828-1910) --

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