※ 引述《monkey0524 ()》之铭言： : Hello,my name is XXX. I’m glad to introduce myself to you. I graduated : from XXXXXXX University last year and I just discharge from army as a second : lieutenant. I’m a platoon leader in army and I had learned a lot of things : from army. I’m a easy-going and optimistic person. My interest is baseball , : table tennis and dog. I am also a member of baseball team in university. I : have many experience of part-time job because I have to pay living expense by : myself. My Japanese language is certificated and I plan to get certification : of English because I’m interesting in English. Except for language, I also : know about computer hardware. When my friend got some problem, they always : ask me for help and I always pleased to help them. I hope I can find a job : that suited to me and get some work experience. : Thanks for your listening. : 这是面试要用的英文自介 : 因为英文说跟写的程度比较不好 : 觉得整篇下来I 很多 不知道有没有办法让I少一点 : 麻烦各位专家帮我修改一下了顺便挑出问题点 : 谢谢 几句可以改写一下 I'm XXX. xx years old. I graduated from XXXXXXX University last year. Easy-going,optimistic personality. One of my favorite is baseball,I was a baseball player in college Computer skill is also my strength,it happened very often that repair computer in my friend's room. Besides,I got qualification in Japanese and next target is English. 反正前面多写些自己会的能力或者介绍自己人格特质 太多过去生活经历体验可以不用写 公司不会在意吧 很多兼差经验可以放後面说 Frankly speaking,to make ends meet myself,many experiences of part-time job in my past. 最後写些 希望可以一起加入你们公司与你们奋斗之类的 应该就可以了 大概写一下 只是想说可以朝这个方式写 就可以少掉不少I了 少掉不少内容 因为我不认识你= = 不晓得你其他的事 应该没什麽大误= = 我自己觉得啦 呵呵 有错请高手指正~0.0 --

※ 发信站: 批踢踢实业坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.135.229.7 对吼 前面几句很顺的就照原po的看过去了 都忘了这是自传= = 谢指正 ※ 编辑: ajia0818 来自: 220.135.229.7 (07/19 00:43)