作者du1 (无二)
看板Eng-Class
标题[问题] 可以麻烦帮我看一下这篇英文吗?
时间Sun Jul 11 22:00:41 2010
由於我的英文程度实在很差...
我自己写完这篇後，念起来觉得很不顺，
也知道自己有非常多的错误要改。(只是不知道怎麽改 Q_Q)
因为是要用说的，
所以想请教板上的达人帮我修改一下，
让口说更顺一点...
谢谢大家了!
When I was a little boy.I was very naughty child.
One day,I went to go fishing at my home nearby pond.
I usually sat under the tree,then wait to fishing.
When I stood and throw the bait,my hip collide with behind the tree.
Then I fall in the pond.
The pond's water was very deep and I felt fear.
Therefore I was loud shouted "Help me"!
At this moment has a man,he jumped heroic and salvage me.
I thought immediately he was a hero,and he was so shine in my eyes.
觉得真的很差，请用力鞭我，没关系!
这样我才能进步，谢谢。
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1F：→ quicknick:我的建议是把国中三年的文法全部读通,并且了解每个字的 07/11 22:40
2F：→ quicknick:词性,还有时式的问题;五大基本句型弄清楚 07/11 22:40
3F：推 christiano:这...改起来很麻烦的... 07/11 22:58
4F：推 ajia0818:这些逐字翻成中文 就好读多了@@ 你有太多基本文法的问题 07/12 07:03