作者jetbike (jb)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 一段用字简单却抓不到重点文章
时间Wed Jul 7 09:49:15 2010
请教各位这一段的语意,
不需要每一个字句都翻译,
我想请问文章传达的意思是什麽?
又该如何用中文表达呢?
谢谢.
(文章来自一本给小小孩看的小故事书)
求中译:属段落:
"Remember, lad," said the newt, "if it's going to be tomorrow,
it might as well be today. And if it is today, it could have
been yesterday. If it was yesterday, then you're over and done
with it, and can write your own book. Think about that."
我的试译:(求译「段落」者,本栏请勿留白)
蝾螈说:[小兄弟,记着,如果它将在明天成行,那麽它也可能会是今天.
而如果它是今天,那麽它也可能已经变成昨天.如果已经成为昨日,那麽
你已经完成它了,然後你就能写下你自己冒险过程的书.想一想吧.]
提问:
其实,我看不懂这段在表达什麽.
所以我只是把字面上的意思翻译一下,
我完全没有抓到重点,
想请各位帮我看看the newt 到底想说些什麽好吗?
谢谢大家.
再附上之前的段落:
"But don't you see," said Avon, close to tears, "the most important
thing in the world is having adventures. Not only have I not had any,
I don't think I ever will. And if I don't have adventures--like the
ones I've read about in these books--I'm bound to be unhappy forever."
"Then go out and seek some adventures," said the newt. "I don't know
how," Avon said.
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1F:→ usread:因为你没看懂it是指什麽, 却把「它」和「成行」拆成两件事 07/07 09:58
※ 编辑: jetbike 来自: 219.84.184.115 (07/07 10:00)
※ 编辑: jetbike 来自: 219.84.184.115 (07/07 10:05)
2F:→ usread:字面上的意思若已看错,意思就更不懂了.「它」=成行,出发 07/07 10:00
3F:→ usread:「变成」, 「成为」也是错解 07/07 10:01
4F:→ usread:故事的要旨就是:早做早成就,不要犹疑拖延. 07/07 10:02
5F:推 usread:如果明天才去,今天也行,如果今天可以,干嘛不昨天呢,若真的 07/07 10:07
6F:→ jetbike:谢谢u大 我现在明白主旨 不过要怎麽翻译成中文来传达意思? 07/07 10:07
7F:→ usread:若真是昨天,那你已经大功告成了,可以开始写你的书了 07/07 10:08
8F:→ jetbike:真的很谢谢 usread大, 很清楚的说明,再次感谢您. 07/07 10:13
9F:推 meteor1212:请教原PO那本书名是什麽呢? 07/07 21:54