作者supernatural (supernatural)
看板Eng-Class
标题[文法] 这两句文法正确吗?
时间Mon Jun 28 20:12:06 2010
She accidentally ate a carton of chocolate that your boss
want to give to his client.
Her boss is very angry,but he don t know who eat chocolate.
He ordered that his employee work overtime.
请问这两句这样写正确吗? 有错的话帮纠正 谢谢
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1F：推 BAPExKAWS:she accidentally ate a box of chocolates that your 06/29 21:23
2F：→ BAPExKAWS:boss wants to give to his client(s). 06/29 21:23
3F：→ BAPExKAWS:Her boss is very angry, but he doesn't know what ate 06/29 21:24
4F：→ BAPExKAWS:it. So he ordered his employees to work overtime. 06/29 21:24
5F：→ BAPExKAWS:(第一句的your boss是不是要改成her boss?) 06/29 21:24