作者astar (Rajagopal)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 帮我修一下一分钟口试稿
时间Mon Jun 21 21:01:32 2010
: I have learned English for about ten years. For me, English is as familiar
: as Chinese since I spend a lot of time on it. I go to the English cram school
I've studied English for ten years. Because I spend a lot of time
on English lessons, I am confident that my English skills are as good
as native speakers.
个人不喜欢 cram school 这个字眼。
: five days a week. I never complain of the busy learning days because English
: has become part of my life. Because of my effort, I am always the one in the
I take an average of five English lessons a week and never had any
complaint about such a busy schedule, possibly because English has
become a part of my life.
: name of my school to attend the English speech competition. I ever won the
: first prize in the county competition when I was grade 2. Teachers usually tell me that I have a talent for English, which
: makes me confident to learn it. I am learning English all the time, and I wish
: I can keep it in my junior high school life. I desire school would give me the
: chance to get further English knowledge. TKS
In the primary school days, I was often elected to attend
English competitions on behalf of my school.
For example, I won the first prize in a national English competition
when I was a primary two student. My past achievements in English
should serve as evidence that I am a gifted secondary student with
enough talent in managing laugnages.
I strongly believe I can make positive contributions to
the Gifted English Class of XXX Junior High School, and therefore I hope
I will be given the chance to join the rest of the outstanding students
of the Gifted Class next semester.
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1F:推 noruas:原波改得好~~但我觉得不符合小六生的口吻(以及程度) 06/21 21:11
2F:→ noruas:这样反而让人觉得这篇是别人写的..学生只是照着背诵.. 06/21 21:13
3F:推 turnoff11:真的太强~谢谢两位大大罗 06/21 22:33
4F:→ hoch:不过我看过北市龙门国中英语资优班学生写的作文,完全看不出 06/22 16:33
5F:→ hoch:是国中生写的。不过他们班上很多ABC之类的就是了。 06/22 16:33
6F:→ hoch:龙门校刊上看到的。感觉成熟到比绝大部分英文很好的台湾大人 06/22 16:35
7F:→ hoch:还好。 06/22 16:35