作者turnoff11 (运动伤害)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 帮我修一下一分钟口试稿
时间Mon Jun 21 20:06:26 2010
学生要去考国中的英资班
有一分钟的口试
题目是Why should you choose me?
以下是我帮他写的稿子
怕有错误的字及文法
麻烦各位高手帮我看一下罗
I have learned English for about ten years. For me, English is as familiar
as Chinese since I spend a lot of time on it. I go to the English cram school
five days a week. I never complain of the busy learning days because English
has become part of my life. Because of my effort, I am always the one in the
name of my school to attend the English speech competition. I ever won the
first prize in the county competition when I was grade 2. Teachers usually tell me that I have a talent for English, which
makes me confident to learn it. I am learning English all the time, and I wish
I can keep it in my junior high school life. I desire school would give me the
chance to get further English knowledge. TKS
这个学生很优秀
很希望他能继续深造
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╭╮ 《襄儿》 ζvictorina◣
╰● 我走过山的时候山不说话，我路过海的时候海不说话；
╭╮ 我坐着的毛驴一步一步滴滴答答，我带着的倚天喑哑。
╰● 大家说我因为爱着神雕大侠，找不到所以在峨嵋安家； ▁
╭╮ 其实我只是喜欢此地的雾，像十六岁那年绽放的烟花。▉襄▏
╰● ——北大未名 AngleMiao ▇
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※ turnoff11:转录至看板 TeachEnglish 06/21 20:07
1F：推 noruas:这位国中生的程度很好@@"" 06/21 20:29
2F：→ noruas:I spend a lot of time on it. 06/21 20:30
3F：→ noruas:=> I've put a lot of time into learning it. 06/21 20:31
4F：推 noruas:I am always the one in the name of my school... 06/21 20:33
5F：→ noruas:=> I am always the student sent by my school.. 06/21 20:36
6F：→ noruas:(也可以用 on behalf of.. 如果国中有教这个的话) 06/21 20:36
7F：→ noruas:(in the name of 藉着..的名义) 06/21 20:37
8F：→ noruas:I ever won the first prize in the county competition.. 06/21 20:38
9F：→ noruas:=> I won first prize in the county competition 06/21 20:40
10F：→ noruas:I can keep it in my junior high school life.. 06/21 20:41
11F：→ noruas:=> I can keep up with it in junior high school 06/21 20:42
12F：→ noruas:I desire => I hope 06/21 20:42
13F：→ noruas:to get further English knowledge => get a better 06/21 20:43
14F：→ noruas:knowledge of English 06/21 20:43