求中译／英译： 背景大意是，学校去年已经退款(信用卡刷退)，但没有通知我。 直到今年我去信问学校时才发现原来已经退款了= = 我向银行调帐单，但六月份的帐单并没有退款。 想请学校提出退款证明。^.^ 我的试译：（求译「段落」者，本栏请勿留白） Dear Admission officer, According your reply: === Greetings! I have reviewed your record and payment history. According to our records, we received the student’s cancellation form request on 6/8/09 and he has already been issued a refund for his housing fee on 6/11/09 in the amount of $1,170 ($1,200 - $30 refund processing fee). The refund was credited back to the original credit card that was used to remit the payment initially.(学校今年五月给我的信) === (以下是我要请学校帮我查帐的试译) Unfortunately, after checking my bank statement ,09 June, carefully, I find that I have not received the refunds you returned. Would you please contact the authorities to find out the whereabouts of the refunds? I will of course be glad to assist you in your investigation. Could you please offer me any receipt to prove that you had already issued a refund and I will help you to trace it. Sincerely, 提问： 1. 我想强调"六月"的帐单，但这样用同位格写不知道对不对 2. 想请学校提供证明(但我又怕写的语气太强烈)...不知道这样写可以吗? (因为其实我也有点怕调错月份帐单...但我如果学校根本没汇款，那...= =再调也白调) 大致就这两个问题^.^ (另外，比较无所谓的(个人感觉)Admission officer可以用在学校单位吗？) 先感恩各位大大的回答了^^ -- 人变少了，可凭吊的遗迹也多了。 --

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