Allow me to reformat your original post, and next time if possible please kindly try to limit your line to ~60 characters as it would be difficult to quote >2 times if it were 80 characters which would be the maximum allowed. See below. Will be edited later if i have further time ※ 引述《linpinyu (einstein)》之铭言： : Last Wednesday, I went to the : Carrefour Mall to buy a ^ pair of : trouser. Before trying ^ trousers ^ trying what on? : on, I was measured the size of waistline. ^ you were measured by whom? ^ whose waistline? : When finding the size of my : waistline increased two inches, This needs to be rewritten. : I decided to lose my weight. You decide to lose weight. You don't decide to lose your weight : Like most people, I go on a diet and : do exercise at least thirty minutes. You prolly want to write this in the past tense : Besides that, I build a good habit of : weighing my weight on the scale and ^ you weight yourself, not your weight. : writing my weight in the diary. If I : find my weight increases too much, I ^ increasing,----^ : would think what foods I eat. This needs to be rewritten. Note the logical problem here: If you want to lose weight, you check your body weight and think about your diet when it does not go down as you wished. You don't wait till you have *increasing* weight while on a diet... : The road of losing weight is very long, ^ doesn't sound well : I continue on keeping this good habit. ^ you *will* continue on keeping this habit --

※ 发信站: 批踢踢实业坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 218.103.212.27 ※ 编辑: calchong 来自: 218.103.212.27 (05/26 01:24) ※ 编辑: calchong 来自: 218.103.212.27 (05/26 01:30) check your tenses if you want to make it mean that way your 4th sentence still sound strange also consider using gerunds... ※ 编辑: calchong 来自: 218.103.212.27 (05/27 11:18)