作者hoch (Sanctuary)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 请问我这样打有错误吗?
时间Thu May 20 09:08:49 2010
: I feel I am lucky because I have a warm family.
I am a lucky man because I grew up in a warm family. <必须加上解释,
为何这样子就很幸运......>
: I am active and optimistic,I also really enjoy in my work.
I always feel optimistic about my work. Besides, I have strong
self-motivation so I enjoy my work very much.
: So after I graduated from high school,I began to looking for job and doing.
I started to look for jobs immediately after obtaining my high school
diploma.
: In the past year,I have done some job ,such as telemarketing to sale the
: Internet...
I have taken many different types of positions, such as a tele-marketing
sales representative and <其他你做过的......>
: These job made me cultivate my patience,and I feel I am grow up in doing
: these job.
其实我不太懂 patience 在这里的意义。因为工作过,所以变很有耐心?个人
觉得这里的逻辑关系不是很清楚。
Such a diverse experience allows me to easily adapt to various types
of works.
: Hope I have a chance to access to company,thank you.
I am very confident that my expertise and backgound would make positive
contributions to your corporation. I am looking forward to hearing from you
soon.
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1F:推 a2301133:corporate? 公司? corporation? 05/20 09:16
※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 120.126.36.193 (05/20 11:29)
2F:推 sdtty:我觉得写的真好 :D 05/20 11:31
3F:→ noruas:推H大!! 面试主管应该会问:Who wrote this for you? 05/20 15:25
※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 120.126.97.68 (05/20 16:25)
4F:推 CapriciousX:大家都好强...感谢 05/20 21:19