我英文也很烂... 也是一天到晚来版上求救... 但是我有发现一点点错误，我先找出我知道的部分 其他的，还是请版上的大大们帮忙罗～～ 希望大家英文一起进步^^ ※ 引述《CapriciousX (追不上的宅)》之铭言： : 我英文很弱。= = : 所以我猜我大概会错很多地方... : 这是刚刚打的，请问我这样打哪里有错误吗? : 可不可以请版上的高手指点一下... Orz : 我整个超弱... : I feel I am lucky because I have a warm family. ^^^^^^ that : I am active and optimistic,I also really enjoy in my work. 这句话包含两句完整的句子会造成run-on， 两个解决办法：要嘛中间用句点;要嘛得加连接词 and 第二个，我觉得应该是enjoy my work就行，不需要in my work... : So after I graduated from high school,I began to looking for job and doing. jobs，我觉得可以把and doing删掉 因为你下一句就已经说明了.... : In the past year,I have done some job ,such as telemarketing to sale the : Internet... 如果是去年，可以用last year，如果是指前几年，可以用in the past few years 年跟工作都是可属名词，要记得加s或是加冠词(a 或是the ) : These job made me cultivate my patience,and I feel I am grow up in doing : these job. 刚上面那句一样job都要加s，jobs 前半句有点怪怪的....但我也不会改（sorry） 後半段我会写：and I feel that I grew more mature doing these jobs : Hope I have a chance to access to company,thank you. company也是需要加冠词..我不知道改your company会不会不礼貌... 所以我会写Hope I have a chance to have access to the company. --

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