作者smaface (Barely Know)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 能否帮我改一小段文章...
时间Sun May 16 23:23:25 2010
※ 引述《sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)》之铭言:
: 这是我自己写的,但是总觉得有地方怪怪的,
: 可是因为本身英文不太好,所以还是不知道怎麽改...
: 希望版上的大大们能够帮忙指点,谢谢!!
: ....(略) However, the same approach may work for different people at a
: certain time but may not work the next time; certain approaches may work
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: for some people but may not work for others as well.
: To sum up, the most important thing for the manager to know when choosing
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the most important thing to know when the manager chooses...
副词子句与主要子句主词不一致不可省略
: an approach is that any technique may both advantages and disadvantages,
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: so deciding which approach to choose could be hard. The only thing that the
: manager can do is to find a way with the best balance between advantages and
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: disadvantages, and depend on more specific situations to make the final
: decision, such as cost, available resource, size and demographic of
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: organizational members, long-term or short-term program, etc.
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: 首先,不知道能不能先帮我看看是不是有很多文法错误...
: 再来就是不知道能不能帮助我改善英文表达,
: 我觉得我写起来好像国小作文喔XDD
: 真的非常谢谢^__^》
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1F:推 sluggard:谢谢您的帮忙,真的非常感谢^^ 05/17 00:07