作者BAPExKAWS (BAPExKAWS)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 一段英文翻的不确定
时间Sun May 16 12:22:02 2010
※ 引述《notbadgirl (想要的太多 得到的太少)》之铭言:
: 求英译:你有收到我刚传的传真吗?请你去传真机看一下﹐
: 这事很紧急,麻烦快帮我处理。我之前在网路上申请,然後会有id,
: 在我按"subitted"後付了钱,但事网路上可以编辑,所以我有更新一些资料,
: 我想请问一下,你们那边是以一sumbitted出的资料为准,
: 还是说如果还可以编辑的话就还可以更新资料,而你们资料以最新的资料
: 不管付了钱没有,只要网站还可以编辑都来的及更改资料吗?
: 然後因为我的英文不是很好,麻烦将您先跟我说且详细解释回信给我好吗?
: 我的email是xxxxx,我之前也同时写信给您了,非常感谢您
: 属段落:(三行以上皆属段落)
: 我的试译:Did you get my the letter that I fax ? Please check it.
: It's urgent and I need your help.Please handle it soon.
: I applied on line and created an id number.I sumbitted and paid.
: But I updated some information after I sumbitted.
: Please let me know how you judge from the information.
: I can update my data or not when I can edit online?
: I can't be sure of your progress.
: What information you approval according to?
: Weather I paid or not,I can always edit if I can do it on line?
: My Englsih is not really good,so please answer me and replid
: the email to me in detail.My email address is XXXXXX.
: I had emailed to you. Thank you for your kind.
: 提问:以上是我的翻译,请帮我看一下语意对不对,可能有点绕舌,但至少希望对方
: 知道我再问什麽,但我的英文不是很好,怕自己翻错或对方不知道我在说啥,
: 请帮我看一下,谢谢!!感恩!!
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: (发文前可将()内文字按Ctrl+y删除,谢谢合作~)
Dear xxx (公司名称)
I have faxed you a copy of this e-mail, it's urgent and I need your help.
I have applied for an account online and created an ID. I already submitted my
personal information and finished the payment. But later on, I have changed
some more of my personal data. I would like to know if it's okay to edit my
personal information after I've done the payment? And will the personal
information at your company's files be the one that I've submitted in the
first place, or will it be the ones I've updated later on? If the website
still allows me to edit my information, am I allowed to do so again and again?
My English is not really good, it'll be kind of you to reply my e-mails
clearly and in detail. My e-mail address is XXXXXX
Thank you very much
sincerely yours,
xxxx(your name)
(I hope this helps!!)
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