作者sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 能否帮我改一小段文章...
时间Sun May 16 11:38:30 2010
这是我自己写的,但是总觉得有地方怪怪的,
可是因为本身英文不太好,所以还是不知道怎麽改...
希望版上的大大们能够帮忙指点,谢谢!!
....(略) However, the same approach may work for different people at a
certain time but may not work the next time; certain approaches may work
for some people but may not work for others as well.
To sum up, the most important thing for the manager to know when choosing
an approach is that any technique may both advantages and disadvantages,
so deciding which approach to choose could be hard. The only thing that the
manager can do is to find a way with the best balance between advantages and
disadvantages, and depend on more specific situations to make the final
decision, such as cost, available resource, size and demographic of
organizational members, long-term or short-term program, etc.
首先,不知道能不能先帮我看看是不是有很多文法错误...
再来就是不知道能不能帮助我改善英文表达,
我觉得我写起来好像国小作文喔XDD
真的非常谢谢^__^
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