作者guanrulee (Cobra)
看板Eng-Class
标题[文法] 有五句我不知到哪边有问题@@?
时间Mon May 3 12:44:15 2010
真的很抱歉
我的研究所教授叫我每个礼拜随便选五句练习照样造句
但是这礼拜的他说要注意一些文法错误
例如第一句有
我有再改一遍1.3.4句
可否帮我看一下是错在哪边呢@@?
1.The idea of using multiple processors both to increase performance and to
improve availability dates back to the earliest electronic computers.
照样造句成
The idea of using solid-state drive (SSD) both to increase performance and
to improve physical loss.
改成
The idea of using solid-state drive (SSD) both to increase performance and
to improve physical loss back to the hard disk.
2.This is a coarse model, as some multiprocessors are hybrids of these
categories.
照样造句成
This is a coarse model, as some memorys are hybrids of these categories.
3.Single instruction stream, single data stream (SISD)-This category is the
uniprocessor.
照样造句成
National Basketball Association (NBA)-This association is the most popular
basketball association.
改成
National Basketball Association (NBA)-This association is the most popular
basketball association in the world.
4.We use the term instruction set architecture (ISA) to refer to the actual
programmer visible instruction set in this book.
照样造句成
We use the solid-state drive (SSD) to refer to how to avoid physical loss
but having access times limited.
改成
We use the solid-state drive (SSD) to refer to the new storage.
5.The other challenges facing the computer architect beyond ISA design are
particularly acute at the present, when the differences among insruction sets
are small and when there are distinct application areas.
照样造句成
The other challenges facing the solid-state drive (SSD) beyond physical
loss are particularly acute at the present, when it uses solid-state memory
to store persistent data.
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1F:推 noruas:1.少动词,原句动词是dates back to 05/03 13:36
2F:→ noruas:2. memory复数是memories 05/03 13:36
3F:→ noruas:3. 文法无误 05/03 13:40
4F:→ noruas:4. refer to + 名词 05/03 13:42
5F:→ noruas:5. when solid-state memory is used to..(後照抄) 05/03 13:44
6F:→ guanrulee:非常感谢^^ 05/03 20:49