作者hoch (Sanctuary)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 一些句子
时间Tue Apr 20 09:28:48 2010
: 1.
: 每当我想起你时,你总不知道我正在想你.
: Everytime I think of you, you won't know I was thinking about you.
我倒是觉得不需要一个字一个字硬翻。如果你是要寄给本国女友或男友,就直
接写中文就好啦。给外籍情侣,就尽量直接用英语思考模式来写。
I am not sure if you ever realize that I think of you all the time.
: 2.
: 只要你一来到我心头,我就无法停止想你.
: Once you come to my mind, the missing will be unstoppable.
我粗浅的建议是这样: I can't stop thinking of you. "只要你一来到我心头"
是赘字,既然想某人,不可能不来到心头。不过这可能是我们这种写太多
科技英文的人的坏毛病。
: 3.
: 第一次遇见你时,我的心就已被你紧紧抓住.
: When the first time I met you, my heart had been grabbed by you.
I had been attrachted to you completely at the moment we first met.
: 4.
: 即便是我自己也不知道当时自己是怎麽想的.
: Even I myself don't get that how was I thinking about that when that time.
一连三个 that。
I don't even know what was in my mind at that time.
: 5.
: 作为一个社会新鲜人,他自然会觉得将近三万块的薪水已经很足够了.
: Of course he would feel satisfied to the paycheck up to thirty thousands as
: a fresh grad.
As a new college graduate, he would probably be happy about a NTD30,000
monthly salary.
: 6.
: 好在你提醒我晚餐取消了,否则我将白花这趟计程车钱.
: Forutnately you tell me that the supper canceled at first, or I will spend
: the cab as futile.
I would have spent a fair amount of taxi fare to get to the restarant
had you not told me that the dinner was cancelled.
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