作者vocalsinger (TUBI)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 帮我看看有没有可以改得地方
时间Mon Apr 19 11:29:27 2010
求中译
The church sonata, containd mostly abstract movements,
often including one or more that used dance rhythms or
binary form but were not usually titled as dance.
属段落
我的试译：
church sonata,几乎都是抽象的乐章,
通常包刮一或多个用舞曲的节奏或binary form,但通常像舞曲一样没标题
提问：
请问我翻译的是正确的嘛?
总觉得有些不通顺>''<
谢谢你们!!
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1F：→ hoch:"church sonata" 通常由好几个抽象的乐章组成。这些乐章会使 04/19 18:26
2F：→ hoch:用舞蹈节奏或是 "binary form"。不过这些乐章都不标记为舞曲 04/19 18:28
3F：→ hoch:我觉得 "one or more" 指的是乐章。 04/19 18:29
4F：→ vocalsinger:感谢您!!!! 04/19 19:02