※ 引述《sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)》之铭言： : 原句子是这样： : The empowered women is supposed to be good for society and for the family 被赋予权力的女人，应该对於社会和家庭都是好的 because her autonomy results in 因为她的自主性造成下列的结果: (1) lower fertility, 较低的生育力 (2)lower infant and child mortality 较低的婴儿与小孩的死亡率 (3)better household welfare 较佳的家庭福祉 (4)higher contributions to economic development,对经济成长有较佳的贡献 (5)and other benefits. 以及其它的好处 : 请问这句话大意是说，empowerment应该是会让社会更好，因为从低生产力... : 变成对社会更有贡献 : 如果我的理解没错， : 那我的疑问是从because开始， : 我觉得result in 後面应该接better household..... : 为什麽会变成原来的句子呢？？ : 另外，我能把句子改成这样吗？？ : The empowered women is supposed to be good for society and for the family : because her autonomy from lower fertility, lower infant and child mortality : to better household welfare, higher contributions to economic development, : and other benefits. : 又或是我整个理解错误呢@@ : 谢谢！！ --

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