作者sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 长句子的改写...
时间Sun Apr 18 13:27:11 2010
原句子是这样：
The empowered women is supposed to be good for society and for the family
because her autonomy results in lower fertility, lower infant and child
mortality, better household welfare, higher contributions to economic
development, and other benefits.
请问这句话大意是说，empowerment应该是会让社会更好，因为从低生产力...
变成对社会更有贡献
如果我的理解没错，
那我的疑问是从because开始，
我觉得result in 後面应该接better household.....
为什麽会变成原来的句子呢？？
另外，我能把句子改成这样吗？？
The empowered women is supposed to be good for society and for the family
because her autonomy from lower fertility, lower infant and child mortality
to better household welfare, higher contributions to economic development,
and other benefits.
又或是我整个理解错误呢@@
谢谢！！
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1F：→ dunchee:"我能把句子改成..."-> 倒也不是能不能的问题，而是你改了 04/19 00:08
2F：→ dunchee:後意思就变了。不过一个更根本的问题是原作者的母语不是英 04/19 00:09
3F：→ dunchee:文。我用Google找到有这内容的Abstract(句子内容和你写的 04/19 00:09
4F：→ dunchee:有些微差别) 作者是 Basu AM 应该是印度人. 如果你有这 04/19 00:10
5F：→ dunchee:paper 而且你确实需要它，那麽暂时不要管文法，直接读它的 04/19 00:11
6F：→ dunchee:内容(一般会在前/後文说明为什麽那句子会那样子表达，比 04/19 00:11
7F：→ dunchee:如作者应该会提为什麽 "lower fertility is good" (不过 04/19 00:12
8F：→ dunchee:如果套入印度"多产"的文化情形/背景来看，这应该不难理解) 04/19 00:12