作者sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 一句英文长句子
时间Sun Apr 18 09:34:44 2010
Not only are men and women in most Asian societies,
or anywhere in the world for that matter,
differentially able to access material resources,
men are much more likely to be granted rights to the time and money to
spend on themselves, often in harmless ways, sometimes in more
invidious ways, as for example, in the right to frequent commercial
sex workers, a “privilege" that women rarely can lay claim to.
我请教版上的高手们，这句子的原本应该是怎麽样的呢？
有没有更直接或是简单的表达方式？？
或是原句子应该是怎麽样，为了让句子更高级，怎麽拆解成这麽多断句，
而且又不会run on sentence....
我真的很想搞清楚这种句子...不然我常常遇到长句子，再加上一大堆逗点
我就只能半猜半懂了...
真的很谢谢！！
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1F：→ jacqueswu:逗号後面就形容前一个子句~ 04/18 10:58
2F：→ sluggard:所以就是一个形容一个，一个接着一个？？谢谢喔^^ 04/18 11:02
3F：→ jacqueswu:但你要清楚主词在哪里动词在哪里~ 04/18 11:12
4F：→ sluggard:不知道能不能请您详细一点的解说呢...因为还是不太懂耶@@ 04/18 11:34
5F：→ jacqueswu:S1: Not only are men and women in most Asian~ 04/18 11:50
6F：→ jacqueswu:S.C: or anywhere in the world for that matter 04/18 11:51
7F：→ jacqueswu:V1: access 04/18 11:51
8F：→ jacqueswu:S2: (while) men are much more likely to be granted~ 04/18 11:51
9F：→ jacqueswu:S.C: often in harmless ways, sometimes in more~ 04/18 11:52
10F：→ jacqueswu:O: ways 04/18 11:52
11F：→ jacqueswu:O.C: in the right to frequent commercial sex~ 04/18 11:53
12F：→ jacqueswu:O.C: (which is) a "privilege"~ 04/18 11:54
13F：→ jacqueswu:句子後面很多形容词子句~必须清楚主要子句跟动词在哪~ 04/18 11:56
14F：→ sluggard:喔喔～感激感激，不过我需要点时间慢慢消化... 04/18 13:15
15F：→ sluggard:知道诀窍後，要是没有你的解释我还是会被混淆找不到主要 04/18 13:16