作者monkey0524 ()
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 恳请英文高手帮我看cover letter and resume
时间Sat Apr 3 15:29:22 2010
Dear Hiring Manager,
Your advertisement for a translator at taipei has prompted my interest
because my qualification seem to align so closely with your needs, and
believe that my education is appropriate for the position.
After I completed my bachelor of Japanese Literature in June, 2009.I had
served in military as a reserve officer to now. And I expect to discharge
from military in July this year. Although English is not my major, but I have
confidence with English. I also have qualification of computer skills such as
word, excel. Additionally, I’m an active person, who is willing to learn new
things that work needed.
I look forward to have an opportunity to interview with you. My enclosed
resume provides additional detail about my background.
Thank you so much for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
resume:
Professional Profile
I am an enthusiastic and curious about international affairs, and also like
to reading newspaper, watching news in English or Japanese. Multimedia
environment and video processing is my professional in vocational school, and
I had experienced teamwork during the Japanese debate competition.
Education
Aug 2009 - July 2010 Military service
Reserve Officer
Sep 2005 – Jun 2009 XX University
Japanese Literature Department
Sep 2002 – Jun 2005 XX Vocational School
Data Processing department
Tethnical skills
Operating systems:Windows XP,Linux B2D
Applications: Adobe Premiere , Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel
Pc Hardware: built & maintain
Language: Japanese, JLPT level 1 certificated
English, moderate
Experience
Platoon leader in quartermaster company, 2010
Exhibitor’s interpreter in Food Taipei , 2009.
Take part in TGSGI translation scholarship , 2009.
Take part in Japanese debate competition of XXXXX university. 2009.
Part-time job on domino’s pizza 2006-2007.
小弟第一次用英文写履历...
有一个问题 报纸上的advertisement 没有注明 HR maneger 的名字
那开头的dear hiring maneger 这样OK吗
拜托英文高手帮我检查一下
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1F:推 jacqueswu:98-1梯的预官吼~这麽早就要投履历啦~真不错! 04/03 17:46
2F:→ aclgpo:I look forward to having... 04/03 18:01
3F:→ usread:若是应徵中译英职位, 可能错误多了些 04/03 18:12
4F:→ monkey0524:冏 错误多了点... = = 04/03 18:23
5F:→ usread:版主表述态力不错,可惜不时出现一些基本文法错误,与表述 04/03 20:51
6F:→ usread:流畅的能力不平衡,颇为奇怪,也许是太匆忙,或平时研读时未注 04/03 20:53
7F:→ usread:基本却重要的小节,如未加s,时态错误,句子半路转走,无主词.. 04/03 20:54
8F:→ usread:都属於应注意却未注意的基本错误,相信你有能力自行更正 04/03 20:56
9F:→ usread:先把基本硬错修正,再进一步提昇修辞构句境界及内容妥适性 04/03 20:57
10F:→ usread:或先从英译文工作做起,多看好文章当范本,底子打好再中译英 04/03 20:59
11F:→ usread:更正:先从英译中的工作做起 04/03 21:00
12F:→ monkey0524:多谢指教 04/03 23:42