作者iswish (看书猫头鹰)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [考题] 高考的改错题
时间Fri Feb 19 00:34:33 2010
我的答案是如下,和你的略有不同。
请高手指正~不好意思,引文删掉一些。
每个句子都含有一处文法或修辞上的错误。请找出错误
: 1.The work was hard, sweating over hot machinery, bending in cramped spaces,
: sometimes mashing his fingers, skinning his knees, twisting heavy wrenches, and getting
: home late and exhausted every night.
exhasted-->exhausting 实在看不懂,但答案跟你一样。
: 2.As a result of this study, the government started planting trees all over
: Kuwait and doing this really had an effect on the weather because the average temperature dropped
: several degrees in past years.
in past years => in the past years 加上the 在过去几年当中。也是不确定
: 3.A University of Manchester astronomer, who thrilled sky watchers when he
: reported discovery of a planet around a neutron star.
who thrilled-->thrilling 实在看不懂,但觉得是去掉逗号耶~
: 4.The two hijackers, one of them threatened the pilot while the other covered
: the cabin,demanded to be taken to an undisclosed Central American country.
them => whom直觉这样改,不知对不对,也不会解释。
: 5.People flying across the country nowadays discover that you can get many
: different fares to the same destination.
flying => travelling 因为人不大可能飞越整个国家,飞机才会。
:
: 7.He is reluctant to tell you by himself because he is afraid that you might be
: worried about a couple of things.
去掉by,独留下himself。强调他不想亲自告诉你。
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