作者uplee (璞你老母)
看板Club831
标题给刘逼!
时间Mon Nov 27 00:26:55 2006
The Man Who Trapped... (In His Depress)
I can see through your pretend
You fake a smile and try to fade away...just fade away...
It's the blood bursts like your tears
Ignore the suffer,walk away ...but walk away...
You fall and destroy , trapped in your depress
You scream with no breathe , I can't hear you say!
And you wipe up all your tears
Just tell me that your're Okay...(your're Okay...your're Okay...)
You hide the dark inside your pain
Turn around and say you're Okay...(your're Okay...your're Okay...)
So hard to say...so hard to say...
I know you are not Okay
You just drown inside your pain...
我又改了一些小地方
你看一下~这样字就比较不会重父!
主歌应该要写第2段八~
还有我觉得歌名要改一下~这样的歌名谁记的住~
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※ 编辑: uplee 来自: 61.230.27.7 (11/27 00:29)
※ 编辑: uplee 来自: 61.230.27.7 (11/27 00:30)
※ 编辑: uplee 来自: 61.230.27.7 (11/27 00:54)
1F:推 dreamuz:这样看起来好像比较顺~第二段我也再想想 61.59.233.175 11/27 10:23