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耶~~終於熬過期中考了~~^^...(雖然不知道是生還還是陣亡....) 日前看了K大的自編自導無人演之TB主軸..... 讓我也興起了想試試看的念頭... 因為想要挑戰http://fanfiction.l-word.com 所以當然是得用英文了....嗚!!因為語文能力不夠好.... 才想先試PO在這裡....希望有英文強的大大可以幫忙校稿囉~~ (免得丟臉丟到太平洋對面去了...QQ~~) 故事設定可以接在S3之後也可以是一個TB different beginning~ 希望大家可以給個意見囉~~ PS.不能忍受比較粗魯言語的大大們....就...別在往下看囉~~ Ch.1 The blond was startled by the ring tone of cell goes off. It was singing “I can see a liar, sitting by the fire~” She realized that was not her cell. And reached out to shook the naked beauty. “Wake up. Bette. Your phone is ringing.” Bette buried her face into pillow and mumbled “fuck~”. She extended her hand to the night stand got her cell when eyes still shut. “Hello~” “Where the fuck are you? You'd supposed to meet me at planet. I am here almost one hour” Alice’s annoyed voice yelled through Bette still cloudy brain from the line another end. “God!!! Can u please quit shout. Damn it! I have the most worse hangover in the world it likes some one have pounded my head out” “So where the hell are you? Are you home or are you end up with some random hot chick somewhere last night Again? “Alice still annoyed with Bette. “Please don’t start. I have a most headache and a stranger lay on my bed by my side. I haven’t even known her name. Dammit!” “Whatever. Just get your ass out of bed and meet me at planet SOON” “okay. Okay. I’ll be there in 30 minutes” The phone went disconnected. Bette jumped in a quick shower and dressed prepare go out to planet. When she reached the front door and realized she have some one in her bed. She yelled toward the bedroom. “Lock the door on your way out” then jumped in her Porsche headed to the coffee shop at the West Hollywood (WeHo). When the walked goddess entered the planet dressed in black low back jeans and white blouse with leather jacket and also worm boot and sunglasses on the head. Everyone just stared at her and mouth opened admire how a damn hot gorgeous. Bette collapsed on a chair opposite Alice. Then yelled to Marina “coffee, make it strong, please! Baby” “So spill it. Who’s that lucky girl this time?” said Alice. “Well, I don’t even know her. I just picked her up at the celebration party after the show. I was drunk and have no idea how we went to my house last night. Fuck! My head is hell. Marina! Honey! Where is my shot? I am dying” Marina brought the mug with the fruit salad and sat next Bette then lean in placed a kiss on Bette’s cheek. “Hey~ what’s up” Bette quick took a sip didn’t answer. “She did that Again. Had wild sex with random hottie that she picked up on her way out of party” Alice stated. “How do you know it was wild?” Bette defends. “Easy! Look who was too carry away to left a mark on your neck” Alice spotted. Bette panicky dug into her purse searched the mirror to check her neck. She gasped when spotted the red mark. “God damn that crazy bitch. It’s so apparent and I have a show today, what could I do with this?” “Calm down, honey, it’s not big deal” said Marina when she rubbed Bette’s back. “Well, it’s not like you are the one performed the show, come on! You are a professional and successful model agent in the WeHo. You can handle it” said Alice. “Also the most incredible fucker in the lesbian community ” Alice sarcastically. “Excuse me?” Bette rose her tone. Alice shrugs. “Whatever, just get in the business now” Bette demanded. continue??? 獻醜了.....請大家給點意見吧~~^^......感激!! PPS.如果有續篇...我會另外找連結點....免得在這裡佔篇幅...^^ --



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1F:推 uilyt:這不是24心中幻想真實的jb吧~(有shane的影子+bette的美好) 04/14 23:32
2F:推 uilyt:失業後換那牌子的車...嗯~~(是貼近生活的jb嗎?) 04/14 23:34
3F:推 darmo:Bette每句都有髒話耶 XD 還有那個everyone啊...... 04/15 00:41
4F:→ darmo:應該是只有你吧~~ ^皿^ ALICE還是很一針見血 真不錯 04/15 00:42
5F:推 kayle:Cool~~ (還好有博士眼的協助.....) 同意U大說ꨠ 04/15 01:16
6F:→ kayle:真有點Shane的影子 這樣好 那就會有很多床戲可看啦 ^O^ 04/15 01:17
7F:→ likegisele24:well,既然上面的這麼說,那這個故事就不能流於俗套囉~ 04/15 10:04
8F:→ likegisele24:如果設定B有一個分居中的丈夫,而T則是一個幸福的 04/15 10:05
9F:→ likegisele24:married...這樣會不會太猛啊~~一個另類的beginning! 04/15 10:06
10F:推 countrysong:B只能開blueSAAB啦, 而且就算ONS場景應該不會在她家裡 04/15 15:12
11F:→ countrysong:以我對Bette的了解 XD 04/15 15:16
12F:→ drunken:如果能直接用英文寫.. 會比較順.. 別用中翻英 !_! 04/15 18:26
13F:推 esasin:1.只有那台寶藍色SAAB 9-3 convertible配得上小貝啦. 04/15 23:53
14F:→ esasin:2.貝氏髒話絕對是簡潔有力的f word, "damn it"太不痛快了XD 04/15 23:57
15F:→ esasin:3.附議小貝不會在自己家搞ONS,這種事只有某人做得出來... 04/16 00:01
16F:→ esasin:(好啦,後面那句我承認是在報復...報復誰呀我) 04/16 00:01
17F:→ esasin:4.按照A&B二人的關係,Al應該不會用"lucky girl"來形容被 04/16 00:04
18F:→ esasin: 小貝挑中的對象,因為Al對小貝並沒有很崇拜或很哈,兩個人 04/16 00:05
19F:→ esasin: 太熟也太瞭解彼此了.Al會作的應該就是那些挖苦和碎碎唸吧 04/16 00:06
20F:→ likegisele24:hey~ladies!!這個故事不是接在S3後面哦~只是用這些角 04/16 00:12
21F:→ likegisele24:色的人格特質重編另一個故事....XD 04/16 00:14
22F:推 countrysong:got it, 看到Marina時就發現了^^只是在家不是小貝風格 04/16 02:22







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