作者yuuyh (倒吊人)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Labyrinth
時間Tue Nov 27 23:04:22 2012
Distant lights slowly
sink into the horizon,
and this known world
gradually deterritorializes itself
into a thousand winding walls
and another thousand forking paths without end...
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1F：推 spacedunce5:brave use of deterritorialization! XD 11/28 09:37
2F：→ yuuyh:I happened to find it a better word XD 11/28 20:46
3F：推 hecati:Welcome to Life! :D Nice job, by the way. 11/28 22:05
4F：→ yuuyh:Thx. I find this one particularly hard to write. The 11/28 22:13
5F：→ yuuyh:title explains everything... I need some comments... 11/28 22:14
6F：推 hecati:on Life? 11/29 20:36
7F：→ yuuyh:Ha ha~ It's just this poem seems to resist being written 11/30 22:46
8F：→ yuuyh:down almost successfully. This is the only bit I got. 11/30 22:47
9F：推 hecati:I understand. But I've been told that "real art cannot 12/02 03:39
10F：→ hecati:be captured in words." (?) 12/02 03:39