作者Tabrith (明鏡止水)
看板poetry
標題[創作] (death)wish fountain
時間Sun Jul 17 03:02:40 2011
little emily was alone.
when the moon was nearly full,
shedding a sombre darkness in the sky.
the water felt lukewarm, carrying a sweet scent,
it whispered deliciously,
but no sound was made.
she could hear a fainting beg:
"oh dear child, make a wish tonight---
or someone precious to you will die."
(...to be continued)
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※ 編輯: Tabrith 來自: 68.237.216.176 (07/17 04:23)
1F：推 leighmeow:好可怕的FOUNTAIN 07/17 11:01
2F：推 spacedunce5:怎麼最近都流行深夜寫詩與未完成式？XD 07/17 12:10
3F：推 hahastarr:GJ! 07/17 13:48
5F：→ Tabrith:i sat down and wanted to write something, 07/17 21:53
6F：→ Tabrith:but as i process i started over-editing it... 07/17 21:53
7F：→ Tabrith:it felt so inorganic i had to stop :( 07/17 21:54
8F：→ spacedunce5:完全了解 07/17 23:10