作者spacedunce5 (CJ)
看板poetry
標題[創作] i will not say goodbye
時間Wed Jun 15 22:52:07 2011
you never say goodbye
it's always me kept waiting in suspense
but the axe never falls
so when you say you must leave
rarely as you do before i do
i will not say goodbye
and be lost in your rush to go
without a backward glance
at my forlorn figure
standing here
waiting
no.
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1F：推 hahastarr:You! Be a man! 06/15 23:52
2F：推 frolicker:i agree with hahastarr!XDD this poem is indeed more 06/16 00:47
3F：→ frolicker:feminine than the ones u wrote before, which makes 06/16 00:48
4F：→ frolicker:it seem like hahastarr's work~XD however, i wrote 06/16 00:49
5F：→ frolicker:all the feminine poems, but i'm GAY! XDDDDD 06/16 00:50
6F：→ spacedunce5:1F: too much stand-up lol 06/16 12:37
7F：→ spacedunce5:gay, no; emasculated...maybe XD 06/16 14:40
8F：→ frolicker:wow...such an irritating word that reveals male 06/16 16:14
9F：→ frolicker:chauvinism! 06/16 16:14
10F：推 dieEule:bull's eye! 06/16 19:13
11F：→ spacedunce5:樓上在同意哪句？= = 06/16 21:08
12F：→ spacedunce5:frolicker可以去看看masculine studies 06/16 21:09
13F：推 dieEule:the revealing of male chauvinism comment 06/16 23:41
14F：→ frolicker:一直以來都是學feminist studies沒學masculine studies, 06/17 01:06
15F：→ frolicker:但剛剛看了一下,仍覺得這是個male chauvinistic word,認 06/17 01:07
16F：→ frolicker:為男性沒有男子氣概是被"去雄",會這樣想的前題就是把陽 06/17 01:08
17F：→ frolicker:剛特質視為較優等,但是身為女性化的男人,我不認為我的心 06/17 01:10
18F：→ frolicker:理性別傾向是起因於"較弱勢",而陽性與陰性間也不應該存 06/17 01:12
19F：→ frolicker:在任何的power relationship,所以我不認同這個字眼,就用 06/17 01:13
20F：→ frolicker:feminization吧! My gender is female, not emasculated 06/17 01:14
21F：→ frolicker:male! and i really doubt this word. (i'll do more 06/17 01:16
22F：→ frolicker:research.) 06/17 01:16
23F：→ spacedunce5:我提到男性研究與此討論串無關啦…… 06/17 01:47
24F：→ spacedunce5:抱歉讓你誤會了= = 06/17 01:47
25F：→ spacedunce5:i think the word you want is effeminate? 06/17 01:48
26F：→ hahastarr:*默默抱著爆米花觀望* 06/17 01:49
27F：→ spacedunce5:emasculate = ex + masculate 06/17 01:49
28F：→ spacedunce5:effeminate = in + feminate; different roots 06/17 01:50
29F：→ frolicker:其實我知道你只是在開玩笑啦! 我只是很訝異竟然會有一個 06/17 02:49
30F：→ frolicker:這麼男權主義的字,我是針對字不是你,甭認真跟我道歉= = 06/17 02:50
31F：→ frolicker:可以說effeminate吧 或是feminine, queen...隨便啦!XDD 06/17 02:57