作者yuuyh (自殺炸彈客)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Reticence
時間Sat Sep 11 01:07:42 2010
Till we come to the end of the shore
where there are no shells to pick,
till the waves recede
and the sun goes down,
till the night wind
ceases to blow,
and I,
i...
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1F：推 hahastarr:and you......are brilliant! :D 122.62.57.74 09/11 08:25
2F：推 spacedunce5:agreed! (be-verb in 2nd line tho) 61.228.78.218 09/11 10:00
3F：推 hecati:cleverly done :) Encore!! 140.112.25.132 09/11 13:06
※ 編輯: yuuyh 來自: 180.218.53.119 (09/11 15:40)
4F：→ yuuyh:Thx!! (forget to correct that be-verb...) 180.218.53.119 09/11 15:42
5F：推 spacedunce5:also "wind cease" but i am willing 61.228.74.247 09/12 16:35
6F：→ spacedunce5:to construe "wind" here as an 61.228.74.247 09/12 16:36
7F：→ spacedunce5:aggregate noun XD 61.228.74.247 09/12 16:36
8F：→ spacedunce5:collective, sorry 61.228.74.247 09/12 16:36
※ 編輯: yuuyh 來自: 180.218.53.119 (09/12 23:03)
9F：→ yuuyh:GOSH, my grammar......thx!! 180.218.53.119 09/12 23:05
10F：→ spacedunce5:i actually liked the collective 61.228.80.171 09/13 00:03
11F：→ spacedunce5:better . . . XDDD 61.228.80.171 09/13 00:03
12F：推 spacedunce5:讀這首讓我想起的 61.228.74.3 01/12 22:47
13F：→ spacedunce5:12-4-11-2-9 61.228.74.3 01/12 22:48
※ 編輯: yuuyh 來自: 180.218.53.119 (01/16 23:01)