作者hahastarr (漫步中的哈哈星人)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Grave
時間Sun Aug 1 16:32:08 2010
I dive into silence
in the silence I sigh
with bittersweet bubbles
for as long as I like
I dive into darkness
in the darkness I cry
with overwhelming shadows
for as deep as I like
I dive into winter
in the coldness I write
with shabby bloody chapters
for as wild as I like
I dive into fire
in the heat I decide
with unspeakable pleasure
for ever here I lie
--
"do u feel lucky today?"
--
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