I smell the fragrance of a flower Near the branch which has a bird Listening the valley's sound around my ears Suddenly I totally understand. Nothing is certainly I cannot bear. When I just a naive kid I tell myself I can be there. Although I will face more challenges indeed I shouldn't so afraid of my fear. Behold the ray of light piercing clouds I see my dream just waits for me there, And I see the almighty Lord He grins at me once again Finally I think I discovered Such a great thing lives on the earth. 第一次寫英詩，希望各位給不才小弟意見 這可算是詩嗎? -- ※ 編輯: cantare 來自: 140.112.248.28 (03/19 17:51)