作者celestial09 (Koouos :D)
看板poetry
標題Re: [創作] Barber Girl
時間Wed Feb 24 00:47:54 2010
: The deepest desire for Duluth
: The chase of dream none can lose
: And dear, I dare not to insult you
: with my cheapest amount
: of my shallowed tip
: I take a bow
: Calling to leave
: Showing my highest respect
: for your lofty soul
: for your genuine hand
: In the bottom of my Heart -
Should I use shallowed or hallowed?
gimme some suggestions?
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