作者celestial09 (Koouos :D)
看板poetry
標題[創作] nostalgia
時間Thu Feb 11 13:23:50 2010
Wondering in a world full of fantasy,
exploring gold, mold, parole.
Too much for me to behold
Fame, power, money, thrilling to blindhold,
yet my heart never grow old.
Too much disgrace to be told
The Stone of Roses mesmerizing
Full of turmoil and doubt
Roaming a thousand miles
alone, of solitude
digging the vapid gold
The Taipei city full of connectivity
Swing, modern, advancement construct to be built
Passion fluttering in the marching wind
calling my heart to dwell
A sleepless town─
full of endless hearty charm
Oh! Hurt not
Bear not
I love you too much so I must left thee
The dreamland of my home sweet home
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-TRUTH is the absolute Beauty embedded in mind-
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◆ From: 123.193.24.253
1F:推 korn31910:I like Stone Roses! 163.29.140.200 02/11 13:30
2F:→ celestial09:should I change that to : 123.193.24.253 02/11 13:37
3F:→ celestial09:"stone of Eagle"?? XDDD 123.193.24.253 02/11 13:37
4F:→ celestial09:give me some suggestions XD 123.193.24.253 02/11 13:37
5F:推 spacedunce5:How about better grammar? 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:41
6F:→ spacedunce5:(Don't hit me XD) 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:41
7F:→ celestial09:shoot! just tell me directly 123.193.24.253 02/11 15:45
8F:→ celestial09:you are smarter in this subject 123.193.24.253 02/11 15:46
9F:→ celestial09:than me. XDD 123.193.24.253 02/11 15:46
10F:推 spacedunce5:I'd lvoe to, but you never log on 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:52
11F:→ spacedunce5:to MSN 61.228.180.238 02/11 15:52
※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 123.193.24.253 (02/11 16:22)
12F:推 korn31910:Personally I prefer "stone of Eagle" 59.115.176.191 02/11 21:04
※ 編輯: celestial09 來自: 123.193.24.253 (04/05 16:01)