作者bucklee (alessio)
看板poetry
標題[創作] Departure
時間Wed Nov 29 23:37:03 2006
Departure
To leave to stay
Question in mind
Oscillating in the balance
of
making an important
decision
to lapse the track left
behind
the storage of the past,
pieces of fragments in the
past tense or present perfect
or ridiculous words said,
read, written but erased,
expunged, eradicated
Some ways out there
exit out there
drastically separate,
split with
the lapsed:
the resoultion to step
forward at the very
moment
to move on and on.
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