作者korn31910 (浮出水面的大肚貓)
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標題[創作] Goodbye, Hello
時間Sat Nov 19 16:24:57 2005
Goodbye, loneliness, my friend
I'm gonna leave you now
From the lake of sadness
I have dived so deep
The angel left a message goodbye
Rocks my world
My heart takes a bow
Gradually fades away into darkness
Hello, happiness, the stranger
Shall we take the chance
To know each other more
Then sail to unknown
The singer sings blues beautifully
Capture my spleen
It feels like home
When she dances and takes my hand
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