作者lavieboheme (靜靜燃燒的夏夜)
看板poetry
標題[創作] 無題
時間Fri Sep 2 04:45:39 2005
She had supposed the stars were just the light
Peircing through the seams of night-sky.
"The dark night is never unpenatrable."
Whereas when all the stars perished with sublimity,
She started to light cigarettes above the ceiling.
With the ephemeral cigarette ends, she painted
The violent glittering rain in her memories.
(Still she remembered its stinning and buring touch;
The wounds bloomed and soon withered into scars. )
The cigarettes hung between the fingers spewed out vaporous oceans.
Those throat-scorching, uninhaled sorrows
Glide as tropical currents roaming into the fuming air.
She buried herself deep into thick dark night, turning into
The ghost ship in abyssal water.
Stiff and unpenatrable,
She pressed herself as an anchor with utter darness.
Sometimes she emerged in the crowds; walked normally
As the sunshine sprayed its splendours.
The bass hum of the simmering sound soared to the surface
Secretly, from deep under, in the blazing rain.
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第一次寫英詩 多多指教 ^ ^'
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