作者yesyouare (夢十夜 )
看板poetry
標題[創作] Nothing man
時間Tue Feb 22 23:27:43 2005
Know a man
With no name
Where he came from, the place ?
The place I don't know far away
Know a man
With no name
Where did he come from, the place ?
The place may be the nearest place
No speak any word
'Cause it's not necessary
You aren't aware him
Without looking for something
There's no word to say
Just a man in nothing
There's no face on his face
He's just a nothing man
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