作者jdpd (jdpd)
看板poetry
標題[創作] the sea.....
時間Fri Jan 9 11:03:50 2004
~The Sea~
"The sea has no limit,"
You've always told me so...
Whenever I think about it,
I feel nothing but sorrow.
The tide rises and falls,
With a deep, despairing sigh;
The big blue that chills
Gives out a silent cry.
Now you keep me company,
But is your heart with me?
The sea between us
Is truly limitless...
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自己寫的爛詩......唉...
不過,是處女作哦!:")
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L'amour est une souffrance qui se doit d'etre vecue...
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