各位厲害的大大們 小弟一直覺得這首唱不好 花了很多時間練 卻總是少了點什麼 這首我是自己彈唱 可以請厲害的大大們直接挑出我的缺點嗎? 感謝了Qrz http://www.wretch.cc/album/show.php?i=sunboy7918&b=12&f=1170962191&pX 順便副上歌詞 Geek in the pink Well let the geek in the pink take a stab at it If you like the way I'm thinkin' baby wink at it I may be skinny at time but I'm fat fulla rhyme Pass me the mic and I'm a grab at it Isn't it delicious crazy way that I'm kissin' This baby listen to this don't wanna miss it while it's hittin' Sometimes you gotta fit in to get in So don't ever quit cause soon I'm gonna let you in but see Well, I don't care what she thinks about me now You’ll get by without me if you want I could be the one to take you home Baby we can rock the night alone If we never get down it wouldn't be a let down But sugar don't forget what you already know I could be the one to turn you out We could be the talk across the town Don't judge me by the color, confuse it for another You might regret what you let slip away I'm the geek in the pink I'm the geek in your pink part I'm the geek in your heart Well my relationship fodder don't mean to bother nobody But Cupid's automatic musta fired multiple shots at her Because she fall in love too often that's what’s the matter At least when I’m talking about it keep a pattern of flattery and She was staring through the doorframe Eyeing me down like already a bad boyfriend Well she can get the toys outta the drawer then Cause I ain't coming home I don't need that attention, see I don't care what she think about me You'll get by without me if you want I could be the one to take you home Baby we could rock the night alone If we never get down it sure would be the let down But sugar don't forget what you already know I could be the one to turn you on You could be the talk across the town Don't judge it by the color, confuse it for another You might regret what you let slip away I am more than you're thinking Hey baby look at me go From zero to hero Oh, take it from a geek like me I can save you from unoriginal dum-dums Who wouldn't care if you com...plete him or not So I got a short attention span A coke in my hand I rather have the afternoon, relax and understand My hip hop and flip-flops will it don't stop with the light rock A shot to mock you kinda puts me in the tight spot Hype is nothing more than hoo-ha so I'm Developing a language and I'm callin' it my own So take a peek into the speaker and you'll see what I mean That on the other side the grass is greener I don't care what you might think about me You'll get by without me if you want I could be the one to take you home Baby we could rock the night alone If we never get down it wouldn't be the let down But sugar don't forget what you already know I could be the one to turn you on We could be the talk across the town Don't judge it by the color, confuse it for another You might regret what you let slip away I'm the geek in the pink pink pink

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