作者withhappy (lemontea)
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標題[其他] 可以問一題文法嗎?
時間Fri Mar 25 19:32:59 2011
這是學校要做的英文期中口頭
有一位同組的組員說這是他的英文老師幫他打的
What are you good at doing?
Good morning everyone, I am xxx
If you ask me what I am good at doing, maybe we should start with my mother
and the kitchen.
When I was a little girl, I always enjoyed watching my mom cooking in the
kitchen.
She is really good at cooking. And for keeping this happy moment in my memory
forever, I began to sketch. That is the reason why I am good at painting.
I like to paint in the park on the weekend and have won many competitions.
Now if you come to our house, you can still see those sketches of memories on
the wall.
我怎麼看就是怪怪的
請問他的文法有錯嗎?
如果這裡不能發這樣的文
我會d
謝謝大家
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1F：→ giono21 :第一句就錯了 doing可以拿掉 其他... 改作文很累的@@ 03/25 21:48
2F：推 shiyachan :我會覺得怪怪的地方是~他前面講了一堆言不及義的內容 03/25 22:47
3F：→ shiyachan :因為他的重點是繪畫~而不是媽媽煮菜@@ 03/25 22:47
4F：推 ritachang708:推樓上想法 我想應該是要表達想繪畫的開始 是由想 03/26 01:39
5F：→ ritachang708:記錄媽媽煮菜快樂的時刻吧...?雖然我也覺得很怪= = 03/26 01:39
6F：→ ritachang708:感覺有種 鋪梗鋪太長 重點只有一點點的感覺... 03/26 01:42
7F：→ withhappy :謝謝大家的建議，所以文法大致上都沒有錯，謝謝大家 03/28 21:02