作者jeryu1992 (會想起/忘記 曾經)
看板TNGS9918
標題Re: [分享] 咻咻呸呸 6
時間Thu Apr 15 13:06:31 2010
人物:PeiPei(呸呸)& Syusyou(咻咻)
正文:
第七輯:字尾-er By 瑢瑢
Since Syusyou was snatched by PeiPei, he had been her prisoner. PeiPei
loved to control everything, so she considered herself a hostess and asked
Syusyou to be her waiter to serve her.
PeiPei was just liked a tigress who played on her prey, which made Syusyou
feel as if she lived in a boiler with boiling water.
One day, Syusypu could not stand PeiPei anymore, He bribed the gardener
to help him escape from the hell PeiPei created. Finally, he succeeded in
getting rid of PeiPei.
評語:
呸呸不要哭,咻咻跑了還有主人啊(抱),其實這兩輯的呸呸都好可憐,除了要綁架她的
壓寨相公之外,還要角色扮演,雖然說女神是演的還滿成功的啦...
但是大家要記得這只是灑狗血的熱血小說...其實呸呸才不是這樣呢(搓頭)
大家有沒有覺得我打這一段很打動人心啊啊啊啊!!!!
其實我自己也覺得耶(呵呵)
結論就是,咻咻你不可以輕易的逃離呸呸喔(咦?)
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我開始停止呼吸,假裝你再我眼前不曾離去。
事實卻是,你不在那燈火闌珊,不在那觸手可及,
已經往前走向,不可逆之境。
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1F:→ syuusyou:我有聽話不會亂逃跑 04/15 13:58
2F:推 PeiPianist:為什麼你不是回珮珮沒有欺負我,好像很委屈一樣(巴) 04/15 17:15
3F:推 syuusyou:珮珮真的沒有在欺負我喔~我是說真的 ﹋﹋ 04/15 17:17
4F:→ jeryu1992:感覺樓上不誠懇。 04/15 18:11
5F:推 hoching18: 不誠懇+1 04/15 22:58
6F:推 rademiel: 不誠懇+1 04/15 23:10
7F:推 syuusyou:QQ 04/15 23:12
8F:推 cloud37:一定是陳珮珮逼他說謊(菸) 04/16 13:07
※ 編輯: jeryu1992 來自: 111.255.174.239 (04/17 10:55)
9F:推 PeiPianist:陳秀昌你快說~我有逼你嗎? 04/17 18:46
10F:→ jeryu1992:咻咻表示: 04/17 19:26
11F:推 syuusyou: 珮珮是正妹:) 04/17 23:01
12F:→ rademiel: ↑狗腿... 04/18 10:25
13F:推 PeiPianist:明明就是中肯 04/18 23:02