作者adgh (come true)
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標題Fw: [請益] 英文自傳請益~
時間Mon Apr 16 22:48:13 2012
想請大家幫我看看我的英文自傳
因為應徵公司的履歷表上只有約14~15行
所以我的自傳不多
應屆畢業生
應徵財務人員
以下是我的自傳
I am Mei. After graduating from Aletheia University, I applied for a
master of economics in Ming Chuan University. My thesis examined the
relationship between a firm size and R&D performance by utilizing
Metafrontier model; and further, I adopted the Network DEA to provide
managerial insight for enhancing performance.
In terms of certificate received, I have got 7 financial professional
credentials and scored 680 in the TOEIC exam since I studied in the
university. Therefore, improving my foreign language competence will be
regarded as one of my primary goals.
When serving as an professor's assistant in graduate school, I learned a
sense of responsibility toward students, above all, those affairs of students
relative to their term grade are required more careful. Due to this
acquirement, I must ensure that client rights and interests will be my top
priority.Besides, since I often had to think about supervisor’s requests in
advance,the position allowed me to enhance not only aggressive attitude
but also problem solving ability.
最後會再加上幾句結語
請版友幫忙修改
感謝!
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※ 編輯: adgh 來自: 114.34.153.49 (04/15 16:49)
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※ 轉錄者: adgh (114.34.153.49), 時間: 04/16/2012 22:48:13
※ 編輯: adgh 來自: 114.34.153.49 (04/16 22:49)
1F：→ aaron1001:第一句何不改成I'm Mei 04/16 23:15
2F：推 mina0627:恩 用My name is 的開頭比較像學生在介紹 04/16 23:19
3F：→ adgh:感謝!! 04/16 23:40
4F：推 espanol:寫得很好耶~覺得看過去很通暢 04/17 00:38
※ 編輯: adgh 來自: 114.34.153.49 (04/17 01:22)
5F：→ adgh:第一句已修改! 04/17 01:23
6F：推 leoyuan:學姐給推！另外，雖然我分數多你200，可是靠自己 04/17 10:54
7F：→ leoyuan:不翻資料應該寫不出你這種自我介紹XD 04/17 10:55
8F：→ adgh:其實我的英文自傳還是蠻多要修改的QQ 而且也是參照很多文章 04/17 12:27
9F：→ adgh:但是還是有很多地方是中文式翻譯 得再修改才行! QQ 04/17 12:27