※ 引述《xenophobia (艾克斯諾佛比亞)》之銘言： : 3. Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other : high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of : these school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and : examples to support your opinion. : ============================================================================== : This issue implies the function of uniform: regulation of students. ^^^^^^^ Do you mean "uniforms" (plural, the clothes), "the uniform" (one item representing all of its kind), or "uniformity" (the idea that everyone is (or should be) the same)? : To wear school uniform is a way to help school administrators to ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^(again, "uniforms" or "the (school) uniform") : differentiate students of their own school from that of other school. ^^^^^^^^^^^^ "another school" or "other schools" : Whereas to deregulate the rule of wearing uniform would confuse ^^^^^^^ : administrators when they intend to manage students, even though deregulation ^^^^^^^^^^^ "Whereas" and "even though" implies each other; you only need (and are allowed to use) one of them. : of uniform enables students much more freedom. : Schools are places for learning and learn to be a citizen.This means schools ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Use the same class of words when connecting them with "and", etc. To avoid repetition of "learning", say "... for studying and learning to be a citizen", for example. : should create a environment which enables students to experience differences : in this society, so that every studnet would realized the importance of x : respect of other values. When students are permitted to choose what to wear, for : They are encouraged to express their own value in the same time. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ at suggestion: "(their own) individuality" : For those who think not wearing uniform may cause students' dis- : obedience, they consider uniform as a way to discipline students. Once every : stuednts wears uniform, they are identical. In the process of wearing : uniform students are all abide by the rules of school. With rules, students : therefore become obedient. : However, schools are not places isolated from true society. Schools should : inspire students to know the diversity of values among the society rather : than control their ability to express themselves in the name of discipline. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Good point! : Only when students have a chance to express their own values, they can : truely practice to respect different values. -- 一個 學術英文寫作 領域的討論板 在 PTT （telnet:ptt.cc〉 【 分組討論區 】 --> 11 國家研究院 政治, 文學, 學術 --> 科學學術研究院 --> 學術總合研究中心 --> ★ST-English PTT 學術英文/論文寫作班 --

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