I tried to find some obvious grammartical errors for you. PS. Correcting these grammartical errors cannot make your article fluent. Maybe it still needs to be revised later. ※ 引述《corson (浪人劍客)》之銘言： : Let me write something about biography of Newton, the most grand : scientist in the 19 century. : I have no reference about Netwon right now, so I just introduce : him by my memory. : The most famous thing is that he found the gravity from an apple : dropped into the ground. The another famous thing for me is that ^^^^^^^ which dropped to the ground. Another famous... : he created the calculus, same as Leibniz. Actually, the time that and so did Leibniz. : they both created the calculus is almost the same. But according ^^ was ^^^ But is rarely used as the beginning in formal writing (some novels will use) : to the history, Newton is angry for this, and claimed that calculus was : originate from him. Since I heard this thing, the evaluation of Newton originated ^^^^^can be skipped : in my mind have became negative. had, or just write became. : Netwon also studied the nature of light, and found the light is like as ^^^^^^^^^^ acts like : particles. He also found the color of light by prism. : Overall, Netwon is the great scientist and established the base of classic greatest basis : physics. His achievement must be absoluately over than I can describe. His achievement is much more than I can describe. : It is my first English writing, hope someone can help me improve this. ^ .Hope .... : Thank you. --

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